Taken

Another day has passed me by Taken gently, by the falling sun, and the starry sky Leaving stiletto barbs that heaven will hone tonight Today disappeared As a slim gray ghost that has been taken away I never thought to say goodbye... It seemed but one of many days That come and go But then a flickering shadow of bare boughs A certain wind that blew Curling brown leaves around my feet As if to remind me This was a phantom day A slim, gray, ghost, That never will pass my way again My thoughts had other needs today And reckless .... was I.... I never thought to say goodbye...
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January 25, 2013 at 7:07 PM
Carrie, congratulations with your amazing win.. xox~PD
Guzzi Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 2:38 PM
Yes, its amazing how life feels endless yet we know it is not, it feels the same, the over and over but yet we know it is not...Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love
Winter Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 1:57 PM
Carrie, this gave me chills and affected me deeply. Please know, there is nothing reckless about you. An exceptional and emotional write. You remain poetess extraordinaire, so loved reading you again. Love you, shar xoxo
Chappell Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 4:59 AM
as always wonderful
Chircop Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 11:42 AM
You bring so much emotion through words dear..awesome
Merryman Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 7:42 PM
Congrats on your win, Carrie! I knew this was a winner the first time I read it! Going in my favs. Love, kim
Arowolo Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 3:43 PM
Fantastic and wonderful piece,Carrie...Congrats on your superb win..
Kovacs Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 12:30 PM
Beautifully written. Congrats!
Bunton Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 11:13 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot once more Carrie luv xx
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 10:31 PM
I second that emotion, of Kash', AMAZING. Carrie, probably I would fave half of everything you write but that is not realistic. My list is already so long. haha. But this is one that somebody should fave!!! Luv, Andrea
Poet Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 6:28 AM
Amazing!!
Mannan Avatar
January 17, 2013 at 10:41 PM
Oh Carrie this is so touching and lovely. Loved every line.
Merryman Avatar
January 17, 2013 at 8:45 PM
This is a wonderful write! Excellent imagery! I really like this. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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