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Take Time and Notice

Re Post TAKE TIME AND NOTICE Sweet velvet chocolate taste A warm night breeze across your face A new born baby's very first smile Children playing all the while Birds flying in the sky Wishing wells where waters lie Oceans deep and oh so blue Brilliant sunshine gleaming through The moon the stars They shine so bright Turns the black night sky to light A twinkle in ones eye of joy A smile that offers love The smell of flowers in full bloom So fragrant they are, they fill the room Be still, and feel your own heart beat Celebrate your life Take time to notice THE WORLD IS WONDERFUL AND BRIGHT!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/11/2009 5:35:00 AM
Thanks for your constant fellowship and comments on my poem, thanks for all the inspiration you bring in every write.
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Date: 9/27/2009 2:30:00 PM
And yes the world is wonderful and bright, we do have a few grey darkened areas. Lovely poem Simone >> James
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Date: 9/20/2009 4:14:00 AM
This is awesome! Take time to notice - how very true, we take things for granted but this brings it all back to us to take time out of our day to see the wonders of the world. Great job!
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Date: 9/19/2009 5:00:00 AM
Sometimes we get too hurried don't we and don't enjoy the little things. You have expressed the idea here very well. Keep writing. Sara
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