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Take This Hand

I hold it out for you; it's waiting, it's ready to take hold of your hand and help keep you steady Rise up from the floor now and again take your place in the world that awaits you, a smile on your face You are well on the way now, to where you can be no waiting, no wanting, for now you are free You've risen above what made you feel incomplete, feel proud of yourself, now the world's at your feet

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Date: 10/21/2014 6:17:00 AM
:) Oh...this is absolutely gorgeous! Loved this. What a sweet write. Hugs
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David Brown
Date: 10/21/2014 5:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Eileen. It was written for a contest with a prompt of 'encouraging words', so I hope that it captured that somewhat

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