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Take the Sunshine, Leave the Rain

If I could take my time again A different thing I'd do; I'd take the comfort, leave the pain, I'd take the sunshine, leave the rain, If only I could start anew. If I could be another's son A different path I'd choose; I'd walk along, I wouldn't run, I'd leave the sorrow, take the fun, If only I could re-infuse. If I could start another hour A different way I'd go; I'd take the sweetness, leave the sour, I'd take the jolly, leave the dour, If only I could make it so. If I could live another day I'd tread a different way; I'd leave the turmoil, take the calm, And leave the coarseness, take the charm, If I could take my time again... I'd take the sunshine, leave the rain. Alan S Jeeves

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Date: 1/27/2022 12:26:00 PM
Hello Alan, sunshine is the suns brightness. I see the rain as sunshine in liquid form for the earth to be wet and makes things grow. That is why I refer it to liquid sunshine. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/27/2022 3:48:00 PM
Hello Alan, the seasons are beautiful in their own way. I prefer summer. Oh you are so lucky to be by the water and mountains. Lucky you. Kind Regards Darlene.
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Alan Jeeves
Date: 1/27/2022 12:43:00 PM
Here at home in Yorkshire, England, I love all seasons Darlene. They all have their own treasures to offer. I live on the moorland and it is a wonderful place to be at any time. Kind regards, Alan

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