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Take The Leap Into My Heart

Frolic into these open arms that need you.
Melt into my lips, and let them feed you.

Let the breath of love's kiss
and my eager feet lead you

into my heart's majestic garden.
Bloom freely, my beauty. I'll never weed you.

There is one trophy in this growth,
and it is, indeed, you.

Should my rare rose be cut,
my garden will truly bleed you.



For Debbie Guzzi's "Take The Leap" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/20/2019 3:00:00 AM
WoW! This debut poem is absolutely beautiful, Juliet. Romeo has surely fallen in a day ... from the gentle force of your ink sway. LOVE your quill style, it is unique. Aurora bright write. Love and smiles and smiles of joy forever.
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Date: 3/20/2014 7:15:00 PM
I need to regroup my values when it comes to romance.~~You surely express a level of depth, a tasteful, but playful, mature passion. ~ Thank you for sharring.
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Date: 1/20/2014 9:31:00 PM
Juliet What a lovely and romantic write. The passion flows in every line. I could feel the devotion pouring out of your heart. Nicely done. Thanks for the great comment on my Phone Call poem.
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Date: 11/17/2013 7:31:00 PM
Lovely romantic ghazal, Juliet, those roses are wonderful. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/15/2013 11:04:00 AM
Juliet, Congratulations, on your 'Take the Leap' win............ LOVE ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 11/13/2013 11:29:00 AM
nicely penned...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/13/2013 11:16:00 AM
Fantastic! Honest, vulnerable, & even sacrificial for the sake of love & security. Outstanding.
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Date: 11/12/2013 3:22:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Juliet
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