Take the Dive

I swim in your love. Through the heaviest waves and The calmest waters.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2013 11:54:00 AM

awesome metaphor of love, Rollo.

Rollo West
Date: 1/3/2013 11:58:00 AM

Hi Andrea, thank you so much for stopping by. Rollo

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/3/2013 12:16:00 AM

Wow Rollo your romantic you is showing ... Loved it .....Seren

Rollo West
Date: 1/3/2013 11:44:00 AM

Hi Seren, thank you so much for stopping by. Rollo

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/2/2013 9:07:00 PM

In every aspect of love I swim with my significant other all of my life! Your poem sure show signs of grandiose power within it, an awesome write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening and dynamic poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Rollo West
Date: 1/2/2013 9:10:00 PM

Hello my friend and thank you for stopping by and your great comment. Rollo