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Take That

take that we meant to give you this loves first kiss ?

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/20/2017 9:08:00 PM

This is most puzzling. Whats "that" instead of the kiss? Hi ice man thank you for your support.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/21/2017 8:55:00 AM

I understand.

Pipping Stars
Date: 9/21/2017 7:44:00 AM

"ice man" freezing your mind to ... "that" ... what steps have you taken towards me with your words ... that we would have to dictate with man hands ... what is "love without an "kiss" ... what mouth need be present to gift a womb ... questions for your moral "support " ... confusion begins here ... " take that" patty ...