Take That

take that we meant to give you this loves first kiss ?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Cresswell Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 9:08 PM
This is most puzzling. Whats "that" instead of the kiss? Hi ice man thank you for your support.
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September 21, 2017 at 8:55 AM
I understand.
Stars Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 7:44 AM
"ice man" freezing your mind to ... "that" ... what steps have you taken towards me with your words ... that we would have to dictate with man hands ... what is "love without an "kiss" ... what mouth need be present to gift a womb ... questions for your moral "support " ... confusion begins here ... " take that" patty ...
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