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Take Take Take Taking a Crap Is More Important Than Taking Your Blood Pressure. Now I'm Just Taking a Piss. -Gray Squirrel 05-15-2025

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Gray Squirrel

Date: 5/19/2025 6:45:00 AM

I Need To Take A Shower.

Gray Squirrel

Date: 5/16/2025 11:24:00 AM

Honestly, I'm a little shocked I even... What's shorter for dumbfounded? What a choice morsel to express comment on... It's all "normal," OMG! I have made that all worse! YUCKKKK! Bad!

Gray Squirrel
Date: 5/16/2025 11:25:00 AM

Get away from there.

Gray Squirrel

Date: 5/15/2025 4:55:00 PM

I'm not sure I said that right... shouldn't it be THE piss?

Gray Squirrel
Date: 5/16/2025 11:26:00 AM

You get away from there too... just go.