Notes About The Poem

Take Take Take

Take Take Take

Taking a Crap
Is More Important
Than Taking Your Blood Pressure.

Now I'm Just
Taking a Piss.

-Gray Squirrel

05-15-2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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May 19, 2025 at 6:45 AM
I Need To Take A Shower.
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May 16, 2025 at 11:24 AM
Honestly, I'm a little shocked I even... What's shorter for dumbfounded? What a choice morsel to express comment on... It's all "normal," OMG! I have made that all worse! YUCKKKK! Bad!
Squirrel Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 11:25 AM
Get away from there.
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May 15, 2025 at 4:55 PM
I'm not sure I said that right... shouldn't it be THE piss?
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May 16, 2025 at 11:26 AM
You get away from there too... just go.
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