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Take Out

A seagull scrounges
pokes through earth in search of lunch
grabs a morsel - leaves.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/3/2010 7:55:00 PM

Hi, CArol, glad to hear the magnetic boards help you. I think I came up with a hundred poems by doing those kind. but we called them Buzz words. Someone would give us ten words and we would make a poem using the ten words. Many of my poems here came from the old Buzz word competitions at places like Shadowpoetry!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2010 8:11:00 AM

What a cool title for this little tale, Carol!!

Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/3/2010 3:15:00 AM

Carol this is a wonderfully alive Haiku ... enjoyed it ... and thank yo u for your very kind comment on my poem love Jayne

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/29/2010 1:26:00 PM

Very wonderful haiku with good images, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/29/2010 12:35:00 PM

So he didn't stay and dine today..Enjoyed reading ..I can just see the scene..I would enjoy a beach front visit today myself...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/29/2010 12:25:00 PM

I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Carol. The best to you in Andrea's contest should you enter it. Love, Carol

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