Take Out

A seagull scrounges
pokes through earth in search of lunch
grabs a morsel - leaves.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 7:55 PM
Hi, CArol, glad to hear the magnetic boards help you. I think I came up with a hundred poems by doing those kind. but we called them Buzz words. Someone would give us ten words and we would make a poem using the ten words. Many of my poems here came from the old Buzz word competitions at places like Shadowpoetry!
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October 15, 2010 at 8:11 AM
What a cool title for this little tale, Carol!!
Eggins Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 3:15 AM
Carol this is a wonderfully alive Haiku ... enjoyed it ... and thank yo u for your very kind comment on my poem love Jayne
Mehta Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 1:26 PM
Very wonderful haiku with good images, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 12:35 PM
So he didn't stay and dine today..Enjoyed reading ..I can just see the scene..I would enjoy a beach front visit today myself...Sara
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September 29, 2010 at 12:25 PM
I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Carol. The best to you in Andrea's contest should you enter it. Love, Carol
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