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Take Off

My beautiful golden butterfly
You go dancing from flower to flower
Then you take off to the big blue sky
Your tiny wings have so much power
Date Written:7/16/2021
3 Place
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Bite Size Poem no 13 Poetry Contest
                                  
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 7/22/2021 11:44:00 AM
Such a lovely poem. I love butterflies and dragonflies. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2021 10:00:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you love this butterfly write. Have a blessed day............
Date: 7/21/2021 3:12:00 PM
A delightful verse, Paula! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2021 11:02:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this Take Off write. Have a blessed day............
Date: 7/21/2021 6:56:00 AM
Charming write, Paula. Congrats on your win. Terry
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/21/2021 11:32:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. It was fun to write. Have a blessed day........................
Date: 7/20/2021 8:46:00 PM
Congratulations! Lovely poem.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/21/2021 11:31:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this fun "Take Off" write. Have a blessed day........................
Date: 7/20/2021 9:40:00 AM
Butterflies are truly amazing creations. I am amazed at the joirney of the Monarch butterflies each year as they migrate to Monterey flying hundreds of miles. Congratulations on your win my friend. Blessings!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2021 10:26:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this butterfly write. I love them. Have a blessed day writing away.................
Date: 7/20/2021 7:15:00 AM
Beautiful Short Creation. Congratulations!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2021 10:24:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day writing away..........
Date: 7/16/2021 10:52:00 AM
Lovely! Great imagery. Your last line so true. I have seen them atop tall trees. All the best for contest.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2021 12:56:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your best. I love butterflies. Have a blessed day writing away..........