Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Take Off

My beautiful golden butterfly                                                                      
You go dancing from flower to flower                                                         
Then you take off to the big blue sky                                                          
Your tiny wings have so much power                                                         


Date Written:7/16/2021    

3 Place 
                                                                 
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Bite Size Poem no 13 Poetry Contest                                   Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Jo Chamberlain July 22, 2021 at 11:44 AM Such a lovely poem. I love butterflies and dragonflies. Congratulations on your winning placement. Paula Goldsmith July 23, 2021 at 10:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you love this butterfly write. Have a blessed day............

Kim Merryman July 21, 2021 at 3:12 PM A delightful verse, Paula! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Paula Goldsmith July 22, 2021 at 11:02 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this Take Off write. Have a blessed day............

Terry Flood July 21, 2021 at 6:56 AM Charming write, Paula. Congrats on your win. Terry Paula Goldsmith July 21, 2021 at 11:32 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. It was fun to write. Have a blessed day........................

Bhawana Pant July 20, 2021 at 8:46 PM Congratulations! Lovely poem. Paula Goldsmith July 21, 2021 at 11:31 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this fun "Take Off" write. Have a blessed day........................

Sam Kauffman July 20, 2021 at 9:40 AM Butterflies are truly amazing creations. I am amazed at the joirney of the Monarch butterflies each year as they migrate to Monterey flying hundreds of miles. Congratulations on your win my friend. Blessings! Paula Goldsmith July 20, 2021 at 10:26 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this butterfly write. I love them. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Christuraj Alex July 20, 2021 at 7:15 AM Beautiful Short Creation. Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith July 20, 2021 at 10:24 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day writing away..........

Rama Balasubramanian July 16, 2021 at 10:52 AM Lovely! Great imagery. Your last line so true. I have seen them atop tall trees. All the best for contest. Paula Goldsmith July 16, 2021 at 12:56 PM Thanks for your note and for your best. I love butterflies. Have a blessed day writing away..........