''Take My Tear''

Heart traveled to my deepest truth.
God unveil the tear that traces the past.
Mothers' voice,hand that caressed my face.
I can no longer embrace.
Loss of such,I surrender to.
Confinement of soul,all that is left are visions of you.
I cry no more.
Set aside a time.
Tear on my floor,for this can't be mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
April 2, 2011 at 5:40 AM
Tender and touching write Kacey.. good luck in the contest luv.. make sure u type your name on your entry for HG.. I also lost my Mom last year and life is missing a piece of the puzzle with her not here... feeling your pain and loss luv..
Falotico Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 3:38 PM
Very good!!!! very Good!!!
Parker Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 1:54 PM
When the tears cease, a trace of mist remains. A nice message entwined in an artful verse.
Greenlee Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 10:15 AM
I dig it.It is personal,real....
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