Take My Hand

Take My Hand



I lost you in the turns you went left and i went right 
 just to put this thing together so everything can change tonight
I'm don't want to argue, fuss or fight 
you can talk to me cause I'll understand 
even the part that you don't feel like a man
Open up and let me inside
 I'm here for you if you'll give me a try 
I will be the mold that makes your plan stand strong
i'll be the one by your side when you are old
I will be the one that will wipes away your tears
If you dear let them drop i will be there
and when you feel that you can't go on
and when you feel like you've taken your last pull
I will be the one encouraging you telling you that you are phenomenal
Let me help you find the King inside 
So you can rule as that mighty Man
I will help you if you just take my hand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/10/2012 2:36:00 AM
Smile ˜ "Your Precious Beauty Has Such A Beautiful Name * Fitting For, 'A Beautiful Queeen' * I Love Your Beautiful Poetry * 'Deja Vu In Priceless * My Love,' Forever;" John!:) ˜
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Joi Murphy
Date: 5/11/2012 9:41:00 PM
Thank you so much John!
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Date: 5/10/2012 2:38:00 AM
...."A Beautiful Favourite In, 'Beauty Is Beauty.'" *
Date: 8/4/2011 2:12:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Joi. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I will return to read more as time allows so keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol
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