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Take My Hand

My sweet, as day turns to night, as my dreams come alive with welcoming thoughts of you my body aches with unbearable pangs that only you, yes you, can truly satisfy. Come, join me in a vision of love, in light that welcomes us two as the earth welcomes the sun of a new day, take my hand. It is with anticipation that I put forth my hand as I also wish to place it upon your heart, to take yours and place it upon my beating heart. I wish you to see just how my heart beats for the vision that is you. With our eyes we will gaze into the eternal sunshine that even penetrates the night as provided on our behalf. Our requests or needs for love will always go answered and satisfied as we are part of the nature itself, containing the light within our hearts, the dreams within our minds and love upon our fingertips to touch each other with our love.

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Date: 7/23/2008 12:02:00 PM
this style of poetry reminds of E.E. Cummings. this was a very well wrote piece of poetry, enjoyed reading it. and thank you for reading my poem and for your comment
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