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Take My Hand

Come with me and take my hand. Let’s walk barefooted in the sand. We’ll talk and dance, laugh and run, You and me and the setting sun. Come to me and kiss my lips. I’ve waited so long for this first kiss. Take me in your arms. Hold me closer. Body next to mine, set my heart on fire. The sea. The sky. One man. One woman. Let’s pretend we’re on a desert island. No hope for salvation. No wish for it. Forget the whole world. To hell with it. Come with me and take my hand. Let’s walk barefooted in the sand. We’ll talk and dance, laugh and run, You and me and the setting sun. AP: Honorable Mention 2022, Front Page Pick 2022 Submitted on March 25, 2020 for contest STRAND CHOICE Q sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 3RD Originally posted on July 6, 2018

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Date: 7/8/2018 3:47:00 AM
You are so in touch with being in love, Line, I cannot help but believe you are!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/8/2018 7:34:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren, for your wonderful visit and comment.
Date: 7/7/2018 6:31:00 AM
I love this, Line! Beautiful write and very well done my dear friend! have a nice weekend...Charlie
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/7/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thanks, Charles. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/6/2018 10:50:00 PM
Love it very much! Very romantic! Reminds me of my poem "Kiss". Read it if you can.. :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/7/2018 5:36:00 AM
Thank you for your delightful visit and comment, Timothy. I will.
Date: 7/6/2018 10:24:00 PM
As a poet who is often dark it was a blessing to read this boon of tranquility which outlines so vividly the splendor of love. Great work Line keep it up!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/7/2018 5:36:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Kyle. Most appreciated.

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