Take My Body

I saw you on that white bed
You looked so beautiful with eyes close
A lot of vines attached to your head
You seemed so comfortable, I supposed


I sat next to you on a vacant space
You were peacefully sleeping still
I held your hand and caressed your face
I know or may not know how you feel


You opened your eyes and looked at me
I smiled so wide and said “Hi”
To be with you is all I want to be
But you kept on bidding your goodbye


I can see your pain but there’s nothing I can do
You said how much you love me
And God knows how much I love you too
Please, take my body. Just take my body.
My constant cry.


09/08/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 8, 2016 at 10:22 AM
A nicely written piece. Welcome aboard, Jeanne. Hugs.
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April 2, 2016 at 3:30 AM
Joanne, well done, a heart felt poem. Linda
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April 2, 2016 at 2:24 AM
Very touching. Can feel the emotional pain.
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