Take Me To Your Leader

experiment failed the aliens have landed reprimand is due 18/08/21

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/8/2018 2:13:00 PM

Hi Maureen, Very vivid imagination. Enjoyed! xoxo

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 8/22/2018 10:38:00 AM

Brief and very pointed, well done. We do need a good reprimand.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/22/2018 4:34:00 PM

I know eh! ;p Thank you so much! xomo

J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/22/2018 1:14:00 AM

Marvelous poem! =)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/22/2018 6:15:00 AM

Tee hee hee! Thank you! ;)) xomo!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/21/2018 3:25:00 PM

Funny from the date I thought this was a warning from the future! (at first I thought the year was 2021, but that's the day, duh!)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/21/2018 4:47:00 PM

Giggles ;) old habits die hard. Warning still stands! lol xomo!

Chris Green

Date: 8/21/2018 2:38:00 PM

I knew it, I just knew it. Man, you close your eyes for one minute and... Funny my friend.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/21/2018 4:47:00 PM

Thankya my friend, wasn't going to enter this one since this was all I could think of, but she asked for it ;p

Tim Smith

Date: 8/21/2018 1:54:00 PM

I just pointed them in the direction of the closest mirror...they were hypnotized

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/21/2018 4:45:00 PM

Lol! ;D