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3/7/2025 for Take Me To Where Love Learns No More sponsored by Justin Bordner

Love tried hard, one day, and overcame fear and learned that, often, gentle hearts will break. Even if one's aim is true and sincere, he can still be in for a sad heartache, and so, love, hung his head, and cried a tear. and thought that he'd made a dreadful mistake, saying, "I'll disappear and shut the door. Take me away to where love learns no more." But, love's learning was not even near through. He learned about patience and forgiving, and discovered when he finds the right two, and they engage in receiving and giving, just the way it was between me and you, that life is worth more than just living. So now, he says, "Don't ever close the door. I've decided, take me to where love learns more."

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Date: 3/7/2025 10:11:00 AM
Hello David, i love this poem. That second verse is speaking to me. It will be my fav. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/7/2025 4:56:00 PM
Hello David, It does sound like a positive poem to me. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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David Crandall
Date: 3/7/2025 3:01:00 PM
Thanks Darlene! I tried to make this one positive.

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