Take Me To That World

Take me to that world
Where I can be what I want
Where the things I imagine come to life
Where minds connect and resonate as one
Where anger, corruption and sorrow are unknown
Where peace, prosperity and happiness are only known
Where even nature knows only to hum
Where will I find such a dream world?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bloomsfield Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 4:05 AM
Sounds like a lovely place to be. .beautiful!Celene.
Alagh Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 6:04 AM
Splendid.I'm sure everyone who reads it will spend a large fraction of their solitary time wondering about such a place. Shine on, Aseem
Culverhouse Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 2:57 PM
take me with you... shaingrala!! LOL
Effendi Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 2:54 PM
Alas! There is no such place as a Utopia on Earth. Very well-versed write. I loved it. Best wishes. Taha
Mehta Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 7:24 AM
Nice lyrical write to create a sanctuary peace, bidyut and thanks for commenting on my poem. It's morning here. so Good morning
Devonshire Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 7:18 AM
It sounds like heaven, Bidyut. Hopefully we'll get to see this place someday. I love the form you developed in this write as well as the content. Best wishes, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 5:30 AM
I love this write especially your last line. Thank you for your comment as well :) Wilma
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