Constance La France Poet Rhyme

Take Me To Nirvana

              There will be bliss,
         when I enter the promised land;
      I will go beyond the blue sky abyss,
         and God will take my hand.
  Beyond the gates I will find a heavenly park,
  a nirvana-  and on a path I will embark;
    oh, the song of a meadowlark,
  I wonder will I recall earth and reminisce.

              I pray each day,
        oh, take me to nirvana God;
      I am so weary-  please take me away,
        earth is a facade-  flawed.
  I can see in my mind your heavenly paradise,
  in eternal tranquility there will be a peace nice;
    of grief I have paid the price,
  beyond the firmament I imagine an archway.

              Nirvana divine,
         a life everlasting world;
      where all hues of nature exist and twine,
       and with stardust I am whirled.
  There will be no pain, no worry-  just serene rest,
  when I am in nirvana and Utopia blessed;
    I guess living is just a test,
  so, on this journey I will try my best to shine.

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September 17, 2022


Poetry/Rhyme/Take Me To Nirvana
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1490-800-17
All Rights Protected, 2022, Constance La France

Theme Chosen -  #3 Take Me To Nirvana

Written for the Standard contest, Pick-A-Title, Vol.32
sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 10/14/2022

Third Place

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Connie Pachecho October 17, 2022 at 8:57 PM I like this poem a lot. It's real. It's serious. You uncorked this poem really well. Constance La France October 18, 2022 at 8:36 AM Connie, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, appreciate, blessings Constance

Edward Ibeh October 17, 2022 at 3:50 PM A mesmerizing piece, Constance. Can I take the trip with you?:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest! Constance La France October 18, 2022 at 8:37 AM Edward, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest, and my placement, and for the compliment, comment and congratulations, appreciate, blessings Constance

Bj Legros Kelley September 18, 2022 at 11:51 PM Rapturous poem Constance <3 I was wondering the same thing, I hope not to remember the hardships and sorrows too well, it's been hard. You've been through so much, I know your dear loved ones await you <3 I have some there as well, we have a promise we hold dearly to our hearts. I love your poem! Constance La France September 19, 2022 at 4:33 AM BJ, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and compliment, blessings ~

Malabika Ray Choudhury September 18, 2022 at 6:49 AM To my Faves. Love ~ Mala Constance La France September 19, 2022 at 4:33 AM Mala, thank you so much for the FAV, blessings ~

Unseeking Seeker September 17, 2022 at 8:13 PM Wow! Beautiful write, Constance! Love it! Constance La France September 19, 2022 at 4:34 AM Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings ~

Malabika Ray Choudhury September 17, 2022 at 4:57 PM WOW! How beautiful and enchanting! You have given a true meaning to this picture, Dear Constance! And your rhyming pattern is excellent - totally mesmerizing! Love and blessings ~ Mala Constance La France September 19, 2022 at 4:36 AM Mala, thank you so much for allowing me to use your and inspiring me to write this poem and than you for the compliment, blessings ~