Take Me To a Lover

My heart 
Swung between two clouds  
My face 
Fell above a bunch of thorns
My ears  
Ran behind the neighing of love 
My steps  
Fell down on the brink of death 
My arms 
Opened to the light of heaven  
My eyelids 
Closed on the sadness  
And my chest  
Narrowed on the pulse of my heart  

Oh God for now 
Take me to a lover knows how to love!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 29, 2013 at 8:25 PM
Fatima, wow... not for nothing but this should be cast on the back of a candle. Hoping God hears your words... enjoyed...LINDA
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October 31, 2013 at 6:33 PM
My dear Linda you will be always my best friend here..<3
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October 5, 2013 at 7:17 PM
This is a deep and powerful write. Full of emotion and feeling. The reader can experience your journey on the road to love. nice job
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October 8, 2013 at 11:53 AM
Robin davis ..thank you my friend ..Appreciated!
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October 4, 2013 at 6:13 AM
Woah lovesick superb poem, nicely pennd! Pls coment my latest, on pink planet
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October 4, 2013 at 8:37 PM
S.Zaynub thank you dear.
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