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Take Me To a Lover

My heart Swung between two clouds My face Fell above a bunch of thorns My ears Ran behind the neighing of love My steps Fell down on the brink of death My arms Opened to the light of heaven My eyelids Closed on the sadness And my chest Narrowed on the pulse of my heart Oh God for now Take me to a lover knows how to love!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/29/2013 8:25:00 PM
Fatima, wow... not for nothing but this should be cast on the back of a candle. Hoping God hears your words... enjoyed...LINDA
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/31/2013 6:33:00 PM
My dear Linda you will be always my best friend here..<3
Date: 10/5/2013 7:17:00 PM
This is a deep and powerful write. Full of emotion and feeling. The reader can experience your journey on the road to love. nice job
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/8/2013 11:53:00 AM
Robin davis ..thank you my friend ..Appreciated!
Date: 10/4/2013 6:13:00 AM
Woah lovesick superb poem, nicely pennd! Pls coment my latest, on pink planet
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/4/2013 8:37:00 PM
S.Zaynub thank you dear.

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