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Take Me There, Please

I haven't been away, For eight hundred plus day's I've devoted my time, To poetry Which rhymes. To lyrics and song, It's been too long. I need a holiday, To just leave and play. Yes, that's what I need, Take Me there Please. Sunshine, Sea breeze, Under palm trees. To reflect, mind at ease. Ooh, a luau indeed, Fill me to the knees. Scuba dive in the sea, New beach party scenes. Blue water, jet skis. Do whatever I need. Take Me there Please.

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 7/17/2022 6:43:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poem, Howard, and can wholeheartedly relate to it. A holiday for both mind and body sounds good to me. Take me there please. Take care, Shirley

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/9/2022 2:44:00 PM

I would if I could, I haven’t had a holiday since 2019 but I’m going away on Monday till Friday and I can’t wait to see the sea, the weather forecast is bright sunny days whilst we’re away, hooray. Enjoyed the read… Belle

R J. Elless
Date: 7/9/2022 4:41:00 PM

Thank you so much Belle. I hope you enjoy your holiday immensely. Howard