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Take Me Home Lord


Take me back home Lord to happiness,
   take me back to my home,
     to family and to the innocence of childhood,
       take me back Lord through the years.

To that tangled haired little girl,
   who loved life,
     and playing make-believe stories,
        to mother and father's love.

Take me back Lord,
  to those years of happiness.   
    Take me back,
      when I knew nothing bad.  
        Take me back,
            to my grandma.

Take me back Lord,
  to live in peace,
    and tranquility,
      and the ignorance of a child.

Far away from the reality of life,
  take me home dear Lord, please.

Only in memories,
  does my love live on and on.
    oh take me back Lord,
      to my childhood.

The road has been hard Lord,
  the journey bitter and difficult,
    and heartbreaks are all that I have.

Take me home Lord,
     take me to my true love,
         take me to my babies,
              take me home dear Lord . . .

(piano solo)

AND one sweet day Lord,
  I will open the gate of heaven,
    and I will be home forever,
      with those I love . . . 

(piano solo)

Oh take me home Lord,
  open those gates wide for me,
    I am not that tangled haired child,
      but a woman coming home.

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October 28, 2015

Lyric

For the contest, Homeward Bound

Honorable Mention
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

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A. Sharma Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 11:17 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with these superb lyrics Broken!
La France Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 7:42 AM
Upma, thanks for the visit and for the awesome and superb, appreciate ~
A  Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 8:08 PM
broken, Congratulations on your Homeward Bound win. SKAT
La France Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 7:43 AM
Skat, thanks so much for visiting ~
Allison Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 12:04 PM
Such beautiful lyrics Broken wings - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 5:03 PM
Jan, thank you for visiting and for the beautiful~
Artis Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 6:47 PM
This could be a hit! I'm serious, you should record it or sell it to someone who sings. I've always wanted to write songs, but I haven't gotten the time to do it yet. So I'm really glad you could pull this off. Kudos +7
La France Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 11:13 PM
Elis, thank you so much for that nice comment, so appreciated, I never see myself as a song writer but I seem to be able to do it when called upon, I would love to have some of my poems put music ~
Smith Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 3:18 PM
A very lovely song. I can hear it as I go through the lyrics.
La France Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 3:31 PM
I hope I got it right Tim, it really was a beautiful melody ~
Y. Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 11:05 AM
BW, you have a penned a beautiful song. I think it's a hit and you should place well. Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis 7
La France Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 11:39 AM
Thank you for the encouragement Alexis, appreciated ~
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