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Take Me Down

Take down all that you are wearing. By that I dont mean your clothes. By that I do mean all that you are baring. I'll run with you,but will you run with me. If I wait for you I hope it's not to long. I hope to find you before the light is gone. Take back all our disaray. We'll go back to the fields where we used to play. And I'll run with you,you're such a lovely being. Take me down. Summer weighs heavy down upon me. I can still feel the sweat pouring down me. I can still taste your lips so beautiful. But I wonder how they are ever going to find me. And I dance with you,but will you dance with me. Take,take,take me down If I wait for you I hope its not to long. But I hope to find you before you before this life is gone. Take back all of our disaray. And we'll go back to the fields where we use to play. And I'll wait for you, you're such a wonderful being.

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Date: 4/20/2016 2:53:00 AM
David Choulat, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*"
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