Take Me Away

Take me to where the oceans breathe life 
Where the sea and land meets
Where the body’s stress can run off by the flow of water
In a stream of joy and happiness
Take me where the moon and meet the earth 
In the clouds where they rap around the earth
As the sea floats the spirit of life
Take me where the wind blows through nature and returns back to and back again 
In natures Seven Wonders of the World 
Take me where you subtract three you get the four elements that has created 
Where they combined at one point to created something soft as the earth we walk on 
To something that is strong as a diamond 
Take me where your flawless state is molded in precious hands  
Every detail is taken into a count 
And After its done it presents a masterpiece like no other
Take me where the mountains meet the door of heaven
And show me what God graces has to offer after serving him
Take me and show me who I am 
From the boy I play childish games
To a Man where I put those games away
Take me on the wings of a dove gracefully over the backdrop of the northern lights
Take me here and there 
Show me what the world is 
Then take me back to you because that far enough I want to b taken

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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