Take Me Away

Take me away from myself 
where I can breathe 
no smoked refinery air, 
somewhere else. 

I cast a lonely wish 
to be someone else 
possessed of life 

it never materialised. 

I cry an empty shell, 
mouthing, moving in circles, 
decreasing as I radiate 
never to brush the shore. 

Let my sweat lie upon you 
one more secret time, 
sacrifice my heart, 

I court fulfilment. 

Turning blind eyes 
snaps me, breaks my heart, 
turning away 

I die.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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January 29, 2012 at 2:30 PM
This is amazing! ... but so depressing... you are so talented, Tony :) I hope everything is alright, and beautiful, beautiful poem... Love, J.
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