Take Me 3

Our love is like a pilot light
Burning long, burning bright
But if that light beomes erratic 
And gas leaks out into my attic
The compresser on my fridge turns on
 Bam! the relics of my life are gone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 5, 2014 at 12:44 PM
Casper, You stand alone with your write. Very unique.
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