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With your hands around my throat, watch me while I choke. I can’t ing breathe, too much ecstasy. I just died in your arms tonight. So save me, I don’t wanna go alone. Will I ever be fine, do I belong in another place? I feel no emotion from you. No sign of life, can you hear my heart beating? Seeking and hiding I been wishing for an end. I got a feeling that I’m not gunna be here next year. You’re in fully control. I don’t want to die alone. I’m blue.

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Date: 1/19/2024 5:37:00 AM
Real sentimentality of real feelings of love. So nice poem! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/15/2024 4:53:00 PM
Kaitlin, your words convey a powerful and intense emotional experience. The imagery of struggle, longing, and a sense of impending change is vividly expressed. The raw honesty in your verses invites reflection on themes of control, belonging, and the complexity of emotions. Your poetic expression captures a moment of deep introspection and evokes a strong emotional response. - Blessings, Daniel
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