Take Me

With your hands around my throat, watch me while I choke.
I can’t ing breathe, too much ecstasy.
I just died in your arms tonight.
So save me, I don’t wanna go alone.
Will I ever be fine, do I belong in another place?
I feel no emotion from you.
No sign of life, can you hear my heart beating?
Seeking and hiding
I been wishing for an end.
I got a feeling that I’m not gunna be here next year.
You’re in fully control.
I don’t want to die alone.
I’m blue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Galyo Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 5:37 AM
Real sentimentality of real feelings of love. So nice poem! Congratulations!
Rodgers Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 4:53 PM
Kaitlin, your words convey a powerful and intense emotional experience. The imagery of struggle, longing, and a sense of impending change is vividly expressed. The raw honesty in your verses invites reflection on themes of control, belonging, and the complexity of emotions. Your poetic expression captures a moment of deep introspection and evokes a strong emotional response. - Blessings, Daniel
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