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Take a Walk With Me

Take a walk with me my love It's a such beautiful night, The moon is shining bright, my darling it's so magical, Can I kiss you underneath the stars? Hold my hand my darling. Take a walk with me, let the moon's glowing light be our guide. Look over there , it's the perfect spot, For us to make sweet music under the stars. It will sound so amazing, we would be in perfect harmony. Take a walk with me…………. 1-24-19 Alexis Y.

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/26/2019 12:23:00 AM

This poem reflects your sweet nature Alexis which I know you have. It is such a caring loving write which reflects that a starlit sky and moon is a perfect recipe for romance. Way to go Alexis, bravo! Poetry huts, Jennifer.

Bobby May

Date: 1/25/2019 6:15:00 AM

This is magical Alexis well done my frind

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/25/2019 5:03:00 AM

You have really honed your sweet and romantic fancy writes, they are lyrical and lifting! The use of alliteration serves to emphasize the romantic flavor. Love this sweet write. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/25/2019 1:51:00 AM

I always try to read the other comments so I can use different words, not wanting to be a copy cat. In this case, I ditto what Connie has said, for she sums up my feelings perfectly, so thank you Connie and thank you Alexis.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/25/2019 12:36:00 AM

A romantic walk under the stars Alexis. Being in nature always inspires ardent feelings. Lovely! : )