Take a Stand

Wind blown thoughts chilled
served raw on a distant plate
sorrow a home cooked meal
and loss was all one could feel

Injured souls sacrificed
for the good of the whole
tagged and bagged
through muck hearts dragged 

Dreams of a slow kiss on a Saturday
on top the hill watching God's picture show
boys turn to men with sounds of a gun
life or death no chance to turn and run

Even today as grey clouds rumble close
engrained in more than just a memory
a love for your country and fellow man
child are you brave enough to take a stand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Teagan Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 9:30 AM
Powerfully stated, perfect.
Vaso Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 4:49 PM
This is an amazing Nov 11th day poem and a fav!
Pettit Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 12:05 PM
Good poetic way to express the evil and horror of warfare.
Green Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Really nice Tim. Your message is clearly expressed
Smith Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Thanks Chris. The millennial generation doesn't know how good they have it.
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