Ravi Sathasivam Poet Light Verse

Take a Journey To the Mountains

Take a journey to the mountains
 and feel your inspiring breath of the fresh air there
 There are beautiful valleys that's curve everywhere
 and feel your nature love that's blushes while you are there

 Stretch your arms over the mountains
 and feel those skies just over there
 There are white clouds that's sails everywhere
 and feel your nature love that's smiles while you are there

 Sing your songs over the mountains
 and feel those melodies that echoes everywhere
 There are so many birds that's flies here and there
 and feel your nature love that's hugs while you are there

 Take your steps over the mountains
 and feel your shadow merely follows the movement of your body
 There are so many greenery that's shower everywhere
 and feel your nature love that's takes care while you are there

 Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Arlene Smith August 4, 2014 at 8:01 AM Very enchanting, Ravi.. You write with a sweet soul.. Hugs.. Arlene

Carolyn Devonshire June 24, 2014 at 1:08 PM Dear Ravi, This is an enticing description of the mountains. Now as the sun beats strongly in Florida, I wish I were in the cool mountain air. Thank you for sharing your work with us. It's so uplifting. Love, Carolyn Ravi Sathasivam July 3, 2014 at 4:50 AM Thanks.

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2014 at 6:03 PM Beautiful and inspiring. You are so spiritually in tune with nature, Ravi. Ravi Sathasivam June 24, 2014 at 1:15 AM Thanks for your comment Andrea. Appreciated

Len Gasun June 22, 2014 at 11:01 AM This is a very symbolic and inspiring poem about mountain my dear friend Ravi. I like it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing. Thank you so much as well for your precious time reading one of my poems. A blessed weekend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Ravi Sathasivam June 24, 2014 at 1:16 AM Thanks for your comment . Appreciated

Toquyen Harrell June 22, 2014 at 7:26 AM Beautiful. I love it :) Ravi Sathasivam June 24, 2014 at 1:16 AM Thanks for your comment . Appreciated

Sara Kendrick June 22, 2014 at 7:25 AM I agree that the mountain views and feeling one gets in mountainous country is inspiring..Great work about the topic..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Ravi Sathasivam June 24, 2014 at 1:16 AM Thanks for your comment . Appreciated

Carolyn Devonshire June 22, 2014 at 5:17 AM Dear Ravi, Now I need to rethink my next vacation. Was going to go snorkeling, but your "mountains" sound so inviting! Great write, my friend. Love, Carolyn Ravi Sathasivam June 24, 2014 at 1:17 AM Thanks for your comment . Appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen June 22, 2014 at 5:02 AM - Thank you for a pleasant journey to the mountains with you on a sunshine Sunday :) - Beautifully written, Ravi - All the best to you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Ravi Sathasivam June 24, 2014 at 1:17 AM Thanks for your comment dear Anne . Appreciated. Hugs xxx