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Take a Good Look At Our Stars

Take a good look at our Stars Your next stop it is Mars Where you wont find any Bars They no longer travel in Cars So i hear you Ask What is Mars appeal Why the big Deal Let me enlighten you Freind For me Mars represents the Light at the End A Prisim around which Earths Darkness can Bend Gods way of prelonging the End Of A future he did not Intend

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Wilma Neels

Date: 7/20/2010 8:35:00 PM

Another interesting piece Chris, enjoyed reading your work this morning.. tc Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2010 5:46:00 PM

So I guess you might be a sci fi fan. I like how this "feels" like sci fi or fantasy writing. Thanks for your comments today, Chris. LUv, Andrea

Susan Mills

Date: 7/16/2010 4:54:00 PM

Remarkable meaning on your poetry here. Enlightened! Love, Susan

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/16/2010 4:40:00 PM

Wow! This is terrific, Christopher! I think we're on the same wavelength in our writing. I wrote a few poems about Mars as well and James Fraser (soup member) writes about astronomy often. As for the adventure at sea, I haven't written about it. But maybe it would make a good short story or narrative poem. I still get chills thinking of the fear I had that night. Then waking up in a few inches of water with a big cabin cruiser -- well, you're right. I should try writing about it.