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Tails of Mopey Dope

Mopey dope
Uncope
Hung rope
No cope 
Now dope 
Grope on rope
No hope 
Dopey
Hung down
Hung deep down
Now 
Forever gone dope

Sponsor: Nikko Palmario
Contest: Heads or Tails
Tails my choice
I did not intend to make fun of anyone
who has depression or has had thoughts
of suicide..

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2012

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Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 2/1/2012 12:23:00 AM I am punishing myself by passing by the entries that I had to eliminate because of the sneaky letters! This was also really good, Sara! I was so sorry to see this one go too-- there was the sneaky letter "L" there for long and low :(--- shucks! but yes, this was a very creative way on touching on suicide...thank you for joining my contest and very clever take on the title by the way! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/16/2012 10:07:00 PM yes... that Nikko...deserves crazy and awesome entries... good luck in her contest,..p.d Login to Reply

Darryl Davis Date: 1/16/2012 1:27:00 PM Quite the take on this topic! Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 1/16/2012 8:58:00 AM this is so good Sara, good luck in contest. harry Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 1/15/2012 7:49:00 PM Of course you didn't Sara! It certainly wasn't taken that way. Took it for the fun it is..... enjoyed Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/15/2012 7:29:00 PM haha. I enjoyed that part: hung long, hung low, long gone dope. This was quite the challenge, wasn't it? good luck in the contest, dear. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 1/15/2012 4:12:00 PM LOL, loved this witty piece - I just can't think of anything for this contest Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2012 4:16:00 PM Well done Sara.Good luck in the contest.- oxox love Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 1/14/2012 2:38:00 PM Wonderful Tails of Mopey Dope, enjoyed, Best of luck for the contest, bl Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 1/14/2012 11:11:00 AM Wow, what depression to the extreme, to the point of suicide! This is such a sad poem Sara! Poetry with shock value...this is certainly one of those writes! Great poem!! Login to Reply