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Tails of Mopey Dope

Mopey dope Uncope Hung rope No cope Now dope Grope on rope No hope Dopey Hung down Hung deep down Now Forever gone dope Sponsor: Nikko Palmario Contest: Heads or Tails Tails my choice I did not intend to make fun of anyone who has depression or has had thoughts of suicide..

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/1/2012 12:23:00 AM

I am punishing myself by passing by the entries that I had to eliminate because of the sneaky letters! This was also really good, Sara! I was so sorry to see this one go too-- there was the sneaky letter "L" there for long and low :(--- shucks! but yes, this was a very creative way on touching on suicide...thank you for joining my contest and very clever take on the title by the way!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/16/2012 10:07:00 PM

yes... that Nikko...deserves crazy and awesome entries... good luck in her contest,..p.d

Darryl Davis

Date: 1/16/2012 1:27:00 PM

Quite the take on this topic!

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/16/2012 8:58:00 AM

this is so good Sara, good luck in contest. harry

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/15/2012 7:49:00 PM

Of course you didn't Sara! It certainly wasn't taken that way. Took it for the fun it is..... enjoyed

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2012 7:29:00 PM

haha. I enjoyed that part: hung long, hung low, long gone dope. This was quite the challenge, wasn't it? good luck in the contest, dear.

Jack Horne

Date: 1/15/2012 4:12:00 PM

LOL, loved this witty piece - I just can't think of anything for this contest

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/14/2012 4:16:00 PM

Well done Sara.Good luck in the contest.- oxox love Anne-Lise

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/14/2012 2:38:00 PM

Wonderful Tails of Mopey Dope, enjoyed, Best of luck for the contest, bl

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/14/2012 11:11:00 AM

Wow, what depression to the extreme, to the point of suicide! This is such a sad poem Sara! Poetry with shock value...this is certainly one of those writes! Great poem!!