Tadpole City

Tadpoles swimming,
so freely on
this cool breezy
    morning.

So many of you,
I see, wondering,
how many of you,
   will survive,

growing into toads,
or frogs will really
bring life to
this pond so grand.

What speed you
have as you
swim around
tadpole city.

wrote 9-27-07  at Lowell ponds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Mckenzie Avatar
July 29, 2008 at 6:54 PM
James I want to be there now so peaceful nice imagery! Laura :)
Jordan Avatar
July 29, 2008 at 1:06 PM
You know James - with each poem you post about these ponds I gain a new insight as to their beauty because you describe everything with such interesting detail - As always a joy to read - Blessings
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