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Tadhana

I may never know what exactly happened, but I think I know the why of it Tadhana…Fate…Destiny…Kismet… Put it in so many words, but it all boils down to that. Tadhana… shivers down my spine, tears prickling my eyes, as I hear once more the story, the destiny of two souls one stormy day in July… She was being stupid, crashing into the waves that day just for the thrill of it He was being pensive, reflecting on how those waves just somehow seemed to soothe him People slowly left the shores as dark clouds loomed in the horizon save for these two souls... She wasn’t even supposed to be there, just a spur of the moment thing, forgetting her other worries she loved storms, she loved the beach combine them and for her it was bliss… He went there for closure, the 10th year of his brother’s death trying to accept that he did all he could he loved him, he loved the beach but guilt drowned him… The rains then came down in sheets, winds whipping, storm waves crashing she was almost at shore though, when the undertow pulled her back He thought he was imagining things, his brother’s ghost perhaps? When he saw her again, and fear was tossed like jetsam Was she the answer he was seeking for? His redemption in another form? Was this the reason why he was here now? Her only hope for salvation? Rushing out to sea, adrenaline rushing through his veins Faith and Fate working together, he swam towards her and as they reached the shore the winds dropped to a whisper, the waves went back tickling sand, the raindrops trickled into drizzles She was breathing, thank God He lay beside her, exhausted She could only thank him with a smile well, a smile that could match the Sun and she took his hand... and put it over her heart It was not so much that their hands fit perfectly, but there was something else... mole on her right ring finger perfectly aligning mole on his left ring finger Tadhana. Shivers down my spine, tears prickling my eyes, as I hear once more the story, the destiny of two souls one stormy day in July… and of why I am here. ** tadhana is a Tagalog word, it can be translated as fate/destiny/kismet July 25, 2010

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Date: 8/17/2014 11:51:00 AM
coming back here to tell you hello . I deleted my blog. I want to judge my contest quickly and I am sure that girl cannot fix her poem in time. thanks for your comment on Wanderlust but I honestly do not like when I write that way. I am just coming up with something to fill a contest. If others like it, I am glad for that. You should see the next few posts I have waiting in the wings. They both suck but the contests just did nothing for me!!!
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Date: 5/18/2013 12:17:00 AM
Rereading this one. it sure made a big impact on a lot of people, I can see as i read their comments. So WAS it your parents??
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Date: 9/28/2011 8:09:00 AM
Dear Rio,, I'm here to give all my old contest winners a late congratulations. Sorry, I forgot to leave everyone a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read every entry more than 3 times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem.. Honestly I don't like my contest winners with out a quick congrats,.. thank you,..p.d. the late bloomer
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Date: 9/24/2011 6:08:00 PM
Congrats Rio on a grand win so wonderful with this dazzling delight of twisted poetry luv.. oh so good...
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Date: 9/24/2011 5:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with your twisted poetry Nikko. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2011 10:54:00 AM
Well written. I really enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/24/2011 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., Rio
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Date: 8/25/2011 5:33:00 AM
Wow, I loved the story and it reminded me of many things...I shall tell you in my e-mail. fav for this one!
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Date: 4/21/2011 4:29:00 PM
Way to go Nikko, Congratulations on your success in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/21/2011 3:07:00 PM
Wow...so imaginative, and indeed gave me "shivers down my spine" !! What a great story teller you are dear, Nikko!!! Loved it! Congratulations !!! :)
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Date: 4/21/2011 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest, nikko
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Date: 4/21/2011 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Nikko. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:45:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Nikko : )
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:23:00 AM
A most bewitching write Nikko. Many warm congrats for this terrific write and win.
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:20:00 AM
Congrats sweet friend Nikko on your tremendous win in Debbie'sw contest with this exceptional entry .. another amazing piece from your creative genius luv.. wishing u a very blessed and Happy Easter dear sweets...
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations Nikko on your win in Tavarus Moreland's contest "Is She The One". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2010 2:15:00 PM
Congrats Nikko on your HM in Tavarus's contest.. an awesome write..wonderful win my friend..enjoy your honor so special today..with luv..
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Date: 7/27/2010 3:23:00 AM
Wow Nikko, amazing write, I couldn't help but feel those tears prickling my eyes too at the end of your story. Defo to may faves!!! LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT!!!! ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/26/2010 5:28:00 AM
Good morning Nikko, how are you, me just hanging. Reading and weeping..hahha kidding about the crying.. I am happy this Monday morning. Later Nikko,.((p.s i posted a new blog)) this one is short hahahahaha ,....p.d.
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Date: 7/25/2010 8:28:00 PM
A great write on Tadhana, a new word I have learnt. I do know Kismet. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/25/2010 4:09:00 PM
"Beautiful!" ~ What else can I say except, I read it twice and, both times it stirred my heart so very deeply and brought a mist, to my eyes ~ What a reflection of what somehow seems, to be a gentle and beautiful soul ~ Smile, "Have A Beautiful Day Dear, Love," John!:) ~
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Date: 7/25/2010 2:41:00 PM
If you don't make top ten, there is no God. (if mine makes top ten, I will THANK God becuase it won't deserve it, hahaha)
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Date: 7/25/2010 2:40:00 PM
This is AWESOME, Nikko. YOu ROCK. WAs it true? I mean, is it about your parents? That would be so cool if it was. I really loved reading this one, dear!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/25/2010 8:26:00 AM
Wow Agent Nikko :) awesome, awesome, awesome! Best wishes for the contest.. Hope you don't mind if I add this to my fav.. Sweet dreams Wilma :)
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Date: 7/25/2010 8:20:00 AM
Kaya mabuti nakasulat, Nikko! Only good that we don't know about our tadhana! Have a nice Sunday yet! And thanks for all your coments!!!....Tc...Gert:)
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