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Tactile Awarenes

She shared a tactile fancy Explored the feelings of the world Inquiries of subtle touch Within her head vision unfurled She visited a wooded glen Saw through sound and scent and presence That she could hold within her hands By touching life – it’s very essence Also hear within old cities Oily boisterous tarmac tales Hold still the warmth of evening's kiss Amid the rows of brownstone vales But most she cherished faces true To who they are and what they do Wrinkles, creases, stories told Once her’s the only one she knew John G. Lawless ©6/13/2023

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Date: 6/13/2023 7:29:00 PM
Those creases and wrinkles forever twinkle in the galaxy of Father Time. ~ Ger A. Beard
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John Lawless
Date: 6/13/2023 7:45:00 PM
...yeah and all because of "that road less traveled by"....
Date: 6/13/2023 11:41:00 AM
Wow, Lawless, This is so outstanding a write, it left me breathless! Incredible imagery, genius! Pangie xx
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John Lawless
Date: 6/13/2023 7:43:00 PM
BREATHE IN---BREATHE OUT---and thanks for stopping to read and comment Pangie
Date: 6/12/2023 10:19:00 PM
This strangely reminds me of the song Dirty Old Town (a truly beautiful and amazing song that I need to get back on my requests list). Beautiful (even with a couple of typos adding to the charm :p)
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John Lawless
Date: 6/13/2023 7:43:00 PM
OMG!!! (or yours) i don't think I've ever made a mistake before....well .... maybe once in '86...i may have made a mistake but in retrospect i could be mistaken about that. thanks for stopping by DD, I'll have to find that song.

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