Tableau Lamp

Flickering ember
against the darkness
angry rain clatters
the glass window pane
wild flowers a sigh
safe from a vexed sky. 

 © Harry J Horsman 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Callus Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 6:04 AM
This is excellent, Harry. I chose the same visual, but you did a better job than I did. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
Ball Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 1:29 PM
Lovely Harry. Well written. I can see my garden when it rains as I read this. Been holding back afraid to plants my seeds and sure enough it snowed today. After this in the rainy season we can expect hail. God Bless and Happy Easter to you and yours. JB
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 3:58 PM
Congrats, Harry. So beautiful! To my faves
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 12:27 PM
The people who did this picture were able to showcase amazing imagery. WELL done, Harry, and congrats.
Crabtree Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 4:01 PM
Great poem, Harry. I wish I would have seen the picture everyone's talking about. Have a great weekend :)
Proxenos Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 11:35 PM
Harry my friend, congrats on a 1st win in this contest, awesome Tableau. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Mitra Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 11:28 PM
Very nice Harry...Congrats on your win..Take care :)
Roper Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 9:42 PM
Great imagery, Harry, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve
Merryman Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 2:43 PM
Great interpretation of the picture, Harry! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Kauffman Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 9:25 AM
Really nice Harry. You have captured the sense of the storm and the safety of the wildflowers inside. Love the "vexed storm" image. Congratulations on your win. Blessings to you!
Goff Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 9:05 AM
Beautiful poetry, Harry!
Devonshire Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 8:07 AM
You have given us both the sights and sounds of this storm, Harry. A wonderful poem in this new tableau form. Congratulations on your win, my friend! Have a blessed Easter, Carolyn
May Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 5:05 AM
Very nicely depicted Harry, Congrats on your win
Buehler Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 9:02 PM
A wonderful poem, Harry. Good luck in the contest. :)
Sands Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 10:18 AM
Great one Harry! Well done :)
Peck Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Nice tableau! The imagery is great! I felt I was there.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 5:18 AM
Lovely tableau, Harry.
Cunningham Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 1:26 AM
There's something homely about a light in the darkness, that feeling of safety and comfort. I too went for the lamp. Good luck in the contest Tom
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