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Tales lend credence to fact reeling in that monster fish understanding the impossible translating within trusting tact hear the choir's tune Live not in what they told you but in adoration of what shall be each movement and each note sung a harmony Align your soul in soft repose meld now your broken way believe not forth a clouded eye in shepherd's cloth it's sewn geld those thoughts brought by to steal under guise of golden goose invite the vow of merry men through dated depths of care your trust, its wield, suspends

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/12/2017 8:30:00 PM

I didnt understand this all either, but I like poems that make us think and contemplate!!! A poem with many levels!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/12/2017 8:29:00 PM

Very contemplative poem, I loved the lines "each movement and each note sung a harmony"

Becca Teagan

Date: 11/12/2017 8:24:00 PM

I've read this three times now and I tried, I really tried, but I can't understand the meaning. It seems that Lin and Jan might have a clue, but... not me. I'll try reading some of your other poems - maybe its just that your style is different than what I'm used to.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/12/2017 12:12:00 PM

Powerfully penned acrostic ... truth lies ambiguity as it is so difficult to ascertain if someone is genuine or an out and out liar. Raw thinker really is a perfect pen name for you my dear:-) hugs jan xx.

Lin Lane

Date: 11/12/2017 9:41:00 AM

Your words beg for more than one reading in this one, raw. Each stanza is filled with warnings, and I love these 4 lines..."Align your soul in soft repose meld now your broken way believe not forth a clouded eye in shepherd's cloth it's sewn." I will add this one to my favs.