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T, B, M's

Tommy Tucker Tater Tott
  Took tomatoes to tip top
  Tossed turned tumbled 
      tripped turning trails
         Telling toothless 
             Tongue tied 
                     tales


Bloom baby boo Busty bombshell 
 boldly blue, Bumping, boisterous 
                Bumbling brew, 
                Bootylicious
                     Boom 
                     boom
                     Boom

Misty mountain mellow moon
 Music made my melody move
    Majestic medley meaningful 
        maze More memories 
             makes my mind 
                    migrate

Copyright © Cherie Thomas | Year Posted 2013

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Harry Horsman Date: 10/12/2013 9:52:00 AM clever poetry, of the highest order, in fact i have never seen an alliteration as good as this.... awesome... truly awesome... Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 10/26/2013 6:46:00 AM Wow harry thanks so much your way to kind:) onelove cherie

Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 9/16/2013 7:33:00 PM Very very very creative!!!! Loved it!!! :) Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 9/18/2013 12:43:00 PM Hi ink I always appreciate you stopping by and commenting your so lovely & cool thanks always ~<3 cherie

Ken Carroll Date: 8/24/2013 5:16:00 PM Hi Cherie, Highly innovative as well as creative... regards, Ken.. Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 8/26/2013 4:01:00 PM Hi Ken thanks for your kind words:0).much appreciated cheriex

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/19/2013 10:46:00 AM - A unique poem Cherie....love it. - Skillfully you are! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 8/21/2013 6:27:00 AM Hi Anne thanks so much for your kind comment:)

Mustapha Mohammed Date: 8/17/2013 7:57:00 PM Sent you a mail my friend. Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 8/21/2013 6:25:00 AM Hi m thanks:) I got it..replied,

Karen Anglesey Date: 8/15/2013 3:00:00 PM WOW... fantastic wit and creativity. Amazing :) Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 8/16/2013 11:05:00 PM Hi karen thanks so much for your lovely comment , really appreciate it cherie:0)

John Loving Iii Date: 8/12/2013 11:59:00 PM Loved it. Worthy of a second try. Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 8/16/2013 11:03:00 PM Hi john,,, thanks so much will definitely give it another go:) appreciate your kind comment thankyou. Cherie...

Poet Tacito Date: 8/12/2013 10:08:00 AM How fantastic. The wordflow here was tripping me out to no end. Wonderfu job! Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 8/12/2013 12:28:00 PM Hi Drake,,, you really made my day with your cool.comment:0) thanks so much....:) <3 cherie

Danesh Morgan Date: 8/11/2013 10:12:00 PM My dear cheery bunny, a long time ago, I've said you have the gift, that few could weave. . . . Now I see you too caught the bug, This contest thing brings out, more of what is hidden inside, It got me into a path to learn, the many forms of writing poems, Metaphor. . . .to dance, shake your booty and hip is easy, but learning the art and form, of different dance style, now that's poetry in motion, a hard work in progress. . . . Keep it up my special friend, Need I say more? lols Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 8/12/2013 9:59:00 AM Hi Danesh,,,your way to kind:) thanks for your lovely compliment my friend. Your so right though great to learn and try new styles and different forms of poetry lol your to cute morgan :) so glad we are friends ty for your comment always xxoo cherrybunny lol

Sean L Sanders Date: 8/11/2013 9:52:00 AM I love the structure of your poem and I love the poem nice job poet Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 8/11/2013 10:28:00 AM Hi.sean thanks so much I always appreciate, your lovely comments:0) <3 cherie

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/10/2013 11:48:00 PM I also love the shape of this one, it looks like you put a lot of work into it. Well done Cherie! Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 8/11/2013 10:26:00 AM Hi richard yeah it did rack my brain a bit lol. Thanks so much for your feedback. Enjoy the rest of your weekend<3 cherie

Sue-Ellen Newman Date: 8/8/2013 4:45:00 AM Excellent I have not seen this style for years we use to do them on a site call ( old blue) poets society , can't remember the name of the style, but I did one using the letter c will look for it and dig it out to post, very talented write, blessings sueellen Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 8/8/2013 5:07:00 AM Hi sue-Ellen...I did this in a poetry challenge awhile ago but didn't know the name of it till s-zay & Tim said alliteration. That's the name, of style. Thanks so much, for your comment. When you get a chance to post yours, would love to read it:) Ty for sharing that with me. Really appreciate your lovely comment. Blessings always,,, Cherie

Stephen Kilmer Date: 8/7/2013 6:27:00 PM WOW, this is really cool. I love it. Great job. I could never pull this one off! Kilmer Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 8/8/2013 5:09:00 AM Hi Kilmer..I think you could:0) thanks so much always appreciate you stopping by..one <3 cherie

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/7/2013 11:34:00 AM you took this approach to greater heights, cherie.. enjoyed the playful appeal of this one.. yess!..:) huggs Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 8/7/2013 3:18:00 PM Thanks nette, I wasnt sure of same letter word , I wrote this in a challenge lol thanks for taking time out to comment always appreciate, your feedback:) very much,,, cherie<3

Tim Ryerson Date: 8/7/2013 11:24:00 AM The ultimate in alliteration!..LOVED it - Tim Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 8/8/2013 5:10:00 AM Also thanks for giving me the name of that style Tim, didn't know what it was when I wrote it lol:) Cherie Thomas Date: 8/7/2013 3:12:00 PM Hi tim, I really appreciate your kind words. Your lovely, :0) cherie...

Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/7/2013 6:38:00 AM clever use of words makes this a good read Shadow x smiles Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 8/7/2013 2:45:00 PM Hi shadow thanks so much for commenting, really appreciate your kind words. :0) cherie,,

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 8/7/2013 3:14:00 AM Wow a super brill alliteration poem. Admire d moon stanza verse most. Kudos. Pls do coment my latest poem too. Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 8/7/2013 3:45:00 AM Hi s. zaynub, thanks so much I wasn't sure of this form Thank you very much:) i looked it up but came up with different definitions, so now i know lol ty:0)your words are very kind, will definetly check yours out an appreciate your comment..cherie

Mustapha Mohammed Date: 8/7/2013 12:13:00 AM Oh I remember this one.You certainly made a feast out of this challenge.Love it dear Cherrybunny. Login to Reply Cherie Thomas Date: 8/8/2013 6:28:00 AM Hi that's ok M lol,,just the fact you came back tells me how cool you truly are:0) catch up soon... Mustapha Mohammed Date: 8/8/2013 3:59:00 AM Oh you better forgive me now...lol.Well you have gotten your question answered my friend.I'm sorry I couldn't return to your poem any sooner.Well I look forward to reading more from you. Cherie Thomas Date: 8/7/2013 1:00:00 AM Your a unicorn now ok I forgive you lol a mythical animal is ok with me ha ha:) I won't go dramatic on you like last time....;0) Cherie Thomas Date: 8/7/2013 12:57:00 AM Hi M , yes I was trying to figure out what type of poem this is. If there was a name for it but , couldn't figure it out. Do you know what it is?? I thought at first it was acrostic, but it's not that's 1st letter of each line spelled out. Need to try a few different styles thought I'd begin with this lol you remember:)

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper Date: 8/6/2013 6:39:00 PM LOL! Interesting poem Cherie! You were able to maintain first letter integrity throughout your poem which is pretty amazing, and it definitely made me laugh! How'd you come up with this one? Login to Reply Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper Date: 8/28/2013 11:55:00 AM Yes you did a good job here, very good!!! And I'm going to look up bootylicious at some point LOL! MC Cherie Thomas Date: 8/7/2013 3:31:00 AM Tommy tucker made me do it ha ha :) & bootylicious is recognized as a dictionary word now LOL, just wanted to venture out try, new forms poetry. I thought of same letter words, from a challenge. Tried to use same letter words that make sense. Thanks so much for your comment & glad I made you laugh:) Cherie.