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T, B, M's

Tommy Tucker Tater Tott Took tomatoes to tip top Tossed turned tumbled tripped turning trails Telling toothless Tongue tied tales Bloom baby boo Busty bombshell boldly blue, Bumping, boisterous Bumbling brew, Bootylicious Boom boom Boom Misty mountain mellow moon Music made my melody move Majestic medley meaningful maze More memories makes my mind migrate

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Harry Horsman

Date: 10/12/2013 9:52:00 AM

clever poetry, of the highest order, in fact i have never seen an alliteration as good as this.... awesome... truly awesome...

Cherie Thomas
Date: 10/26/2013 6:46:00 AM

Wow harry thanks so much your way to kind:) onelove cherie

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 9/16/2013 7:33:00 PM

Very very very creative!!!! Loved it!!! :)

Cherie Thomas
Date: 9/18/2013 12:43:00 PM

Hi ink I always appreciate you stopping by and commenting your so lovely & cool thanks always ~<3 cherie

Ken Carroll

Date: 8/24/2013 5:16:00 PM

Hi Cherie, Highly innovative as well as creative... regards, Ken..

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/26/2013 4:01:00 PM

Hi Ken thanks for your kind words:0).much appreciated cheriex

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2013 10:46:00 AM

- A unique poem Cherie....love it. - Skillfully you are! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/21/2013 6:27:00 AM

Hi Anne thanks so much for your kind comment:)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/17/2013 7:57:00 PM

Sent you a mail my friend.

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/21/2013 6:25:00 AM

Hi m thanks:) I got it..replied,

Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/15/2013 3:00:00 PM

WOW... fantastic wit and creativity. Amazing :)

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/16/2013 11:05:00 PM

Hi karen thanks so much for your lovely comment , really appreciate it cherie:0)

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/12/2013 11:59:00 PM

Loved it. Worthy of a second try.

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/16/2013 11:03:00 PM

Hi john,,, thanks so much will definitely give it another go:) appreciate your kind comment thankyou. Cherie...

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/12/2013 10:08:00 AM

How fantastic. The wordflow here was tripping me out to no end. Wonderfu job!

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/12/2013 12:28:00 PM

Hi Drake,,, you really made my day with your cool.comment:0) thanks so much....:) <3 cherie

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/11/2013 10:12:00 PM

My dear cheery bunny, a long time ago, I've said you have the gift, that few could weave. . . . Now I see you too caught the bug, This contest thing brings out, more of what is hidden inside, It got me into a path to learn, the many forms of writing poems, Metaphor. . . .to dance, shake your booty and hip is easy, but learning the art and form, of different dance style, now that's poetry in motion, a hard work in progress. . . . Keep it up my special friend, Need I say more? lols

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/12/2013 9:59:00 AM

Hi Danesh,,,your way to kind:) thanks for your lovely compliment my friend. Your so right though great to learn and try new styles and different forms of poetry lol your to cute morgan :) so glad we are friends ty for your comment always xxoo cherrybunny lol

Sean L Sanders

Date: 8/11/2013 9:52:00 AM

I love the structure of your poem and I love the poem nice job poet

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/11/2013 10:28:00 AM

Hi.sean thanks so much I always appreciate, your lovely comments:0) <3 cherie

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/10/2013 11:48:00 PM

I also love the shape of this one, it looks like you put a lot of work into it. Well done Cherie!

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/11/2013 10:26:00 AM

Hi richard yeah it did rack my brain a bit lol. Thanks so much for your feedback. Enjoy the rest of your weekend<3 cherie

Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/8/2013 4:45:00 AM

Excellent I have not seen this style for years we use to do them on a site call ( old blue) poets society , can't remember the name of the style, but I did one using the letter c will look for it and dig it out to post, very talented write, blessings sueellen

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/8/2013 5:07:00 AM

Hi sue-Ellen...I did this in a poetry challenge awhile ago but didn't know the name of it till s-zay & Tim said alliteration. That's the name, of style. Thanks so much, for your comment. When you get a chance to post yours, would love to read it:) Ty for sharing that with me. Really appreciate your lovely comment. Blessings always,,, Cherie

Stephen Kilmer

Date: 8/7/2013 6:27:00 PM

WOW, this is really cool. I love it. Great job. I could never pull this one off! Kilmer

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/8/2013 5:09:00 AM

Hi Kilmer..I think you could:0) thanks so much always appreciate you stopping by..one <3 cherie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/7/2013 11:34:00 AM

you took this approach to greater heights, cherie.. enjoyed the playful appeal of this one.. yess!..:) huggs

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/7/2013 3:18:00 PM

Thanks nette, I wasnt sure of same letter word , I wrote this in a challenge lol thanks for taking time out to comment always appreciate, your feedback:) very much,,, cherie<3

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/7/2013 11:24:00 AM

The ultimate in alliteration!..LOVED it - Tim

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/8/2013 5:10:00 AM

Also thanks for giving me the name of that style Tim, didn't know what it was when I wrote it lol:)

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/7/2013 3:12:00 PM

Hi tim, I really appreciate your kind words. Your lovely, :0) cherie...

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/7/2013 6:38:00 AM

clever use of words makes this a good read Shadow x smiles

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/7/2013 2:45:00 PM

Hi shadow thanks so much for commenting, really appreciate your kind words. :0) cherie,,

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/7/2013 3:14:00 AM

Wow a super brill alliteration poem. Admire d moon stanza verse most. Kudos. Pls do coment my latest poem too.

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/7/2013 3:45:00 AM

Hi s. zaynub, thanks so much I wasn't sure of this form Thank you very much:) i looked it up but came up with different definitions, so now i know lol ty:0)your words are very kind, will definetly check yours out an appreciate your comment..cherie

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/7/2013 12:13:00 AM

Oh I remember this one.You certainly made a feast out of this challenge.Love it dear Cherrybunny.

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/8/2013 6:28:00 AM

Hi that's ok M lol,,just the fact you came back tells me how cool you truly are:0) catch up soon...

Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/8/2013 3:59:00 AM

Oh you better forgive me now...lol.Well you have gotten your question answered my friend.I'm sorry I couldn't return to your poem any sooner.Well I look forward to reading more from you.

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/7/2013 1:00:00 AM

Your a unicorn now ok I forgive you lol a mythical animal is ok with me ha ha:) I won't go dramatic on you like last time....;0)

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/7/2013 12:57:00 AM

Hi M , yes I was trying to figure out what type of poem this is. If there was a name for it but , couldn't figure it out. Do you know what it is?? I thought at first it was acrostic, but it's not that's 1st letter of each line spelled out. Need to try a few different styles thought I'd begin with this lol you remember:)

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 8/6/2013 6:39:00 PM

LOL! Interesting poem Cherie! You were able to maintain first letter integrity throughout your poem which is pretty amazing, and it definitely made me laugh! How'd you come up with this one?

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 8/28/2013 11:55:00 AM

Yes you did a good job here, very good!!! And I'm going to look up bootylicious at some point LOL! MC

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/7/2013 3:31:00 AM

Tommy tucker made me do it ha ha :) & bootylicious is recognized as a dictionary word now LOL, just wanted to venture out try, new forms poetry. I thought of same letter words, from a challenge. Tried to use same letter words that make sense. Thanks so much for your comment & glad I made you laugh:) Cherie.