T, B, M's

Tommy Tucker Tater Tott
  Took tomatoes to tip top
  Tossed turned tumbled 
      tripped turning trails
         Telling toothless 
             Tongue tied 
                     tales


Bloom baby boo Busty bombshell 
 boldly blue, Bumping, boisterous 
                Bumbling brew, 
                Bootylicious
                     Boom 
                     boom
                     Boom

Misty mountain mellow moon
 Music made my melody move
    Majestic medley meaningful 
        maze More memories 
             makes my mind 
                    migrate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horsman Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 9:52 AM
clever poetry, of the highest order, in fact i have never seen an alliteration as good as this.... awesome... truly awesome...
Thomas Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 6:46 AM
Wow harry thanks so much your way to kind:) onelove cherie
Ink-U-Script Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 7:33 PM
Very very very creative!!!! Loved it!!! :)
Thomas Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 12:43 PM
Hi ink I always appreciate you stopping by and commenting your so lovely & cool thanks always ~<3 cherie
Carroll Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 5:16 PM
Hi Cherie, Highly innovative as well as creative... regards, Ken..
Thomas Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 4:01 PM
Hi Ken thanks for your kind words:0).much appreciated cheriex
Andresen Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 10:46 AM
- A unique poem Cherie....love it. - Skillfully you are! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Thomas Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 6:27 AM
Hi Anne thanks so much for your kind comment:)
Mohammed Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 7:57 PM
Sent you a mail my friend.
Thomas Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 6:25 AM
Hi m thanks:) I got it..replied,
Anglesey Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 3:00 PM
WOW... fantastic wit and creativity. Amazing :)
Thomas Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 11:05 PM
Hi karen thanks so much for your lovely comment , really appreciate it cherie:0)
Loving Iii Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 11:59 PM
Loved it. Worthy of a second try.
Thomas Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 11:03 PM
Hi john,,, thanks so much will definitely give it another go:) appreciate your kind comment thankyou. Cherie...
Tacito Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 10:08 AM
How fantastic. The wordflow here was tripping me out to no end. Wonderfu job!
Thomas Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 12:28 PM
Hi Drake,,, you really made my day with your cool.comment:0) thanks so much....:) <3 cherie
Morgan Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 10:12 PM
My dear cheery bunny, a long time ago, I've said you have the gift, that few could weave. . . . Now I see you too caught the bug, This contest thing brings out, more of what is hidden inside, It got me into a path to learn, the many forms of writing poems, Metaphor. . . .to dance, shake your booty and hip is easy, but learning the art and form, of different dance style, now that's poetry in motion, a hard work in progress. . . . Keep it up my special friend, Need I say more? lols
Thomas Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 9:59 AM
Hi Danesh,,,your way to kind:) thanks for your lovely compliment my friend. Your so right though great to learn and try new styles and different forms of poetry lol your to cute morgan :) so glad we are friends ty for your comment always xxoo cherrybunny lol
Sanders Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 9:52 AM
I love the structure of your poem and I love the poem nice job poet
Thomas Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 10:28 AM
Hi.sean thanks so much I always appreciate, your lovely comments:0) <3 cherie
Lamoureux Avatar
August 10, 2013 at 11:48 PM
I also love the shape of this one, it looks like you put a lot of work into it. Well done Cherie!
Thomas Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 10:26 AM
Hi richard yeah it did rack my brain a bit lol. Thanks so much for your feedback. Enjoy the rest of your weekend<3 cherie
Newman Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 4:45 AM
Excellent I have not seen this style for years we use to do them on a site call ( old blue) poets society , can't remember the name of the style, but I did one using the letter c will look for it and dig it out to post, very talented write, blessings sueellen
Thomas Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 5:07 AM
Hi sue-Ellen...I did this in a poetry challenge awhile ago but didn't know the name of it till s-zay & Tim said alliteration. That's the name, of style. Thanks so much, for your comment. When you get a chance to post yours, would love to read it:) Ty for sharing that with me. Really appreciate your lovely comment. Blessings always,,, Cherie
Kilmer Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 6:27 PM
WOW, this is really cool. I love it. Great job. I could never pull this one off! Kilmer
Thomas Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 5:09 AM
Hi Kilmer..I think you could:0) thanks so much always appreciate you stopping by..one <3 cherie
Onclaud Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 11:34 AM
you took this approach to greater heights, cherie.. enjoyed the playful appeal of this one.. yess!..:) huggs
Thomas Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 3:18 PM
Thanks nette, I wasnt sure of same letter word , I wrote this in a challenge lol thanks for taking time out to comment always appreciate, your feedback:) very much,,, cherie<3
Ryerson Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 11:24 AM
The ultimate in alliteration!..LOVED it - Tim
Thomas Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 5:10 AM
Also thanks for giving me the name of that style Tim, didn't know what it was when I wrote it lol:)
Thomas Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 3:12 PM
Hi tim, I really appreciate your kind words. Your lovely, :0) cherie...
Hamilton Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 6:38 AM
clever use of words makes this a good read Shadow x smiles
Thomas Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 2:45 PM
Hi shadow thanks so much for commenting, really appreciate your kind words. :0) cherie,,
Kamoonpuri Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 3:14 AM
Wow a super brill alliteration poem. Admire d moon stanza verse most. Kudos. Pls do coment my latest poem too.
Thomas Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 3:45 AM
Hi s. zaynub, thanks so much I wasn't sure of this form Thank you very much:) i looked it up but came up with different definitions, so now i know lol ty:0)your words are very kind, will definetly check yours out an appreciate your comment..cherie
Mohammed Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 12:13 AM
Oh I remember this one.You certainly made a feast out of this challenge.Love it dear Cherrybunny.
Thomas Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 6:28 AM
Hi that's ok M lol,,just the fact you came back tells me how cool you truly are:0) catch up soon...
Mohammed Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 3:59 AM
Oh you better forgive me now...lol.Well you have gotten your question answered my friend.I'm sorry I couldn't return to your poem any sooner.Well I look forward to reading more from you.
Thomas Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 1:00 AM
Your a unicorn now ok I forgive you lol a mythical animal is ok with me ha ha:) I won't go dramatic on you like last time....;0)
Thomas Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 12:57 AM
Hi M , yes I was trying to figure out what type of poem this is. If there was a name for it but , couldn't figure it out. Do you know what it is?? I thought at first it was acrostic, but it's not that's 1st letter of each line spelled out. Need to try a few different styles thought I'd begin with this lol you remember:)
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 6:39 PM
LOL! Interesting poem Cherie! You were able to maintain first letter integrity throughout your poem which is pretty amazing, and it definitely made me laugh! How'd you come up with this one?
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 11:55 AM
Yes you did a good job here, very good!!! And I'm going to look up bootylicious at some point LOL! MC
Thomas Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 3:31 AM
Tommy tucker made me do it ha ha :) & bootylicious is recognized as a dictionary word now LOL, just wanted to venture out try, new forms poetry. I thought of same letter words, from a challenge. Tried to use same letter words that make sense. Thanks so much for your comment & glad I made you laugh:) Cherie.
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