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Syndromes

Syndromes

Syndromes are the stained glasses

that the others gawk at

Syndromes are check ins and check ups

of any given individual

Syndromes are the scattered brains that lead to

The unjust Beginnings of their demised breaking points!

Syndromes are the artifacts that judges

judge without the consideration or the care

Syndromes are the struggle, the pain, and the tears!

Syndromes are the rule benders that lead

a help in hand to a life of torment.

Syndromes are the real and not real,

that broke into reality unlawfully

Syndromes

Syndromes

Syndromes

Syndromes are the pain living giving

right of any person

Syndrome is the defined meaning

Of the "struggle is real."

This is what the word syndrome

means in my world.



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Date: 1/19/2016 7:56:00 PM
Fullmoon, interesting write. The repeated words gave the entire poem the syndrome feel. enjoyed. SKAT
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