Synchronized

Synchronized
     By Dane Smith-Johnsen

Long and slender with graceful curves   
Your embrace, curled close to my back.
Two peas in a pod, loves reserves.
Souls seek sweet slumber without lack.

Steadfastly, adoration grows.
And night’s sleeping becomes a dance.
Darkness befalls tomorrow’s glow.
Hypnotic grandeur grants love’s glance.

Synchronized, our two hearts leap.
Always, snuggled with true love fed.
Short and cushy, without a peep
We as one are to slumber led.

Two peas in a pod passion melt.
Cuddling in the twin sized bed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mannan Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 5:06 AM
Many congratulations on this win dear Dane.
Brown Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 2:20 PM
Congratulations on your win Dane Ann in Audrey's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
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November 7, 2010 at 8:02 AM
Congrats Dane Ann on your big win in the love letters contest with this excellent entry depicting luv.. enjoy this happy Sunday with lots of luv..
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November 7, 2010 at 7:56 AM
Such a loving dedication to your husband, dear friend. It must be fun cuddling in that "twin sized bed." Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 7:40 AM
THE CONTEST IS OVER AND YOU ARE A WINNER..SARA
Haick Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 4:14 PM
Dear Dane Ann, I must thank you for supporting my contest with this beautiful Sonnet.. Congratulations! Love always, Audrey
Freeman Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 3:32 PM
Congratulations Dane on your worthy placement in the top ten. Agape, MOses
Mehta Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 3:11 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Dane
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September 10, 2009 at 12:07 AM
Dane Ann, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
Jordan Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 6:59 PM
Dane Ann - Congratulations on placing in Nathan’s “Two Peas in a Pod” contest – God Bless, mj
Augustus Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 2:18 PM
Nicely done! Very beautiful! Congratulations on your win!
Mason Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 9:14 AM
Beautifully done, Dane and a well-deserved selection to be a winner in Nathan's contest. Congratulations !!
Brown Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 3:30 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 12:06 AM
Congrats on your success in Nathan's contest Dane.Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 5:43 PM
Congratulations, Dane Anne....a sweet poem and delight to read!! ~
Leccese Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 5:17 PM
Congratulations on a Honorable Mention in my contest! Nate.
Loving Iii Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 6:38 PM
twin size bed!? i remember that one. thank's for the memory. john h loving iii
Guzzi Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 2:18 PM
Blew my silly verse right out of the water you did! Loverly! Just Lovely!
Strand Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 8:25 AM
Best wishes with this one Dane.Rgds Brian & thanks for youre welome comments today.
Richards Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 6:33 AM
Wonderful entry to the contest.....a winner for sure..Lovely writing, Dane Ann!! ~ Carrie
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August 11, 2009 at 8:12 PM
What a beautiful poetess you are! I adore this one for so many reasons, not the least of which, is it's clutch of the reader's heart-light- A favorite for the file to be sure! love, poet butterfly:)
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