Synchronize: A Dance of Thought and Feeling

Synchronize: A Dance of Thought and Feeling

This momentary presence

The rhythm of overflowing excitement
Distant silence of blue mountains.
Tender steps breezing a dance —
Can there be more to this moment to meet?

The inner ecstasy of awareness glows,
Radiating peacefully from deep within.
Shapes of blankness reflect in shades —
Can there be more to this moment to feel?

A sanctuary of ideas, emotions, reflections — we conclude,
Building momentum toward the abstract: known and unknown.
Will you hustle a smile, harbour attachment, or quietly slide —
Screaming joy, gleaming sad, letting all abide?

;dead and born the next moment.

For the moment that's past

This distance to now, still in the dance here and living.

;recover from the thought, the future is cast.

For the feeling in waves

This thought is a claim, every step bending bait for conquer,
This feeling be a touch in the still, bringing past waves to future base.

;flowing with divine grace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 5/10/2025 10:26:00 AM
Dear Nithin, I enjoyed the sense of appreciation and gratitude reflected in your vivid imagery speaking to the present moment of exploration of thoughts and emotions, the inner and outer spaces of human experience. Congratulations for your success in Kai's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Nithin Mohan
Date: 8/2/2025 7:22:00 AM
Dear Susan, I’m truly grateful for the recognition. I feel excited and uplifted knowing that my very first attempt reached someone it genuinely touched—someone who truly understood it. Your kind words mean a lot. Warm regards, Nithin
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