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8/23/2024

Moonlight or Sunrise Poetry Conest

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As the dark world starts to waken you can almost hear the symphony of color that floods the sky as the sun begins to rise As the dawn breaks, the world begins to wake up from the sleep of darkness the birds sing their morning songs, the people begin to make many sounds as they awake and start their routines It almost sounds like a full orchestra as noises infiltrate the day, become louder as the light becomes brighter and turns into the cacophony of life The day has begun as the beautiful symphony of life plays it song

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Date: 1/1/2025 11:06:00 PM
Nice one
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Kathleen Hassall
Date: 1/2/2025 2:43:00 PM
Thanks, Debbie!
Date: 12/29/2024 3:29:00 PM
I like the visual and auditory crescendo of the orchestra in your poem, the brightness and loudness together. I also like the image of the sky flooding ( a painting term as well as the watery inundation). J :)
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Kathleen Hassall
Date: 12/30/2024 4:44:00 PM
Thank you, Jeanette.
Date: 9/5/2024 6:51:00 AM
Dear kathleen nice to see you again in winners list. You have a way with words and writing a way that connects with readers and we can resonate. I really loved your opening here especially “ you can almost hear the symphony of color that floods the sky as the sun begins to rise” love that! Pleasure reading! Congratulations on your win!
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Kathleen Hassall
Date: 9/6/2024 4:56:00 AM
Thank you! I am so excited to have placed. This one was fun to write!!!

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