Symphony of The Sunrise

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08/19/24

Moonlight or Sunrise

Cantest by Ink Empress


                          Clouds floating underneath caught my vision          
                           like torn pieces of white carded cotton.
                           I was flying in the sky crossing ocean.
                           Red Sun about to peep through horizon.

                         Charmed to see changing color-spectrum
                        on my flight, looking through the plane-window,   
                          overwhelmed, watching the sky-album,
                        amused to see me above, Sun below.

                       Sunbeams started to paint sky at random.
                        Refraction, reflection , diffraction dazzled.
                      Dawn-sky touching horizon turned awesome.
                       Gorgeous Sunrise made me just puzzled.

                      Once I chanced to glance amazing sunrise
                       resonating on rhythmic symphony
                       on splendorous view with grand surprise.     
                        Sky glowing on  sunshine in harmony.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/21/2024 3:58:00 AM

Must be for a contest because I have seen several of these with the same theme. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Great that you described a sunrise while in flight. Sara K