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I see the luminosity of morning's twilight emerging on the periphery of my panoramic view where it gradually evolves garbed in gray and red clouds strewn across the horizon as embroidery stitched into the sky an evocative touching colored thread of serenity uplifting a stunning new garment as the day begins a new birth of majestic majesty and marvel leaving me in a solemn moment of grandeur and breathless awe draped in profound spiritual perfection as it uncouples from the last drop of saturated darkness that was the night The simplicity of this beautiful scene beckons the miracle of life's constant motion of the painted kaleidoscopes that lay before me drenched in the morning's colorful harmonious light that washes over me like a sensual symphony of visual stimulation and ecstasy from its splendor and beauty bringing a tender sense of peace to an old soul who walks the flowering gardens of life wiping away a tear for the gift of another morning's light causing my heart to sing

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Date: 9/5/2024 5:29:00 AM
Dear frederick! Where do i begin praising this gorgeous write! Your word choice here and how youv painted imagery shows that you have the mind of an artist! I just love everything about this poem especially the opening left me in awe! Sometimes i judge my contests with my cousin, a poet too and she loved it too! We both absolutely enjoyed reading this poetic gem! “ who walks the flowering gardens of life wiping away a tear for the gift of another morning's light causing my heart to sing” what an evocative ending! So touching! Congratulations on your win! Thank you for writing
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