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contest-Moonlight or Sunrise

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Symphony of the Sunrise

I see the luminosity of morning's twilight
emerging on the periphery of my panoramic view
   where it gradually evolves
garbed in gray and red clouds
strewn across the horizon  as embroidery
   stitched into the sky
an evocative touching colored thread of serenity
   uplifting a stunning new garment
as the day begins a new birth
   of majestic majesty and marvel
leaving me in a solemn moment of grandeur
   and breathless awe
draped in profound spiritual perfection
as it uncouples from the last drop of saturated darkness
   that was the night

The simplicity of this beautiful scene
beckons the miracle of life's constant motion
of the painted kaleidoscopes that lay before me
drenched in the morning's colorful harmonious light
that washes over me like a sensual symphony
   of visual stimulation and ecstasy
from its splendor and beauty
bringing a tender sense of peace
   to an old soul
who walks the flowering gardens of life
   wiping away a tear
for the gift of another morning's light
   causing my heart to sing
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Date: 9/5/2024 5:29:00 AM
Dear frederick! Where do i begin praising this gorgeous write! Your word choice here and how youv painted imagery shows that you have the mind of an artist! I just love everything about this poem especially the opening left me in awe! Sometimes i judge my contests with my cousin, a poet too and she loved it too! We both absolutely enjoyed reading this poetic gem! “ who walks the flowering gardens of life wiping away a tear for the gift of another morning's light causing my heart to sing” what an evocative ending! So touching! Congratulations on your win! Thank you for writing
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