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August 23, 2024

"Moonlight or Sunrise" Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Ink Empress

Sun at dawn! A sight so spectacular I wake up and gaze... surreal, stunning, sensational! Ultramarine sky, a hue of crimson in the east, A red dot growing bigger and bigger turning the horizon ruby-red! Mesmerized me! A gush of lavender emotions run through my veins, How do I describe this kaleidoscopic vision! A symphony of chimes soaring from a temple far away, Peaceful, tranquil, harmonious, My existence fills with prayers, my body kneels To the almighty who has blessed us with this sunrise, The source of life on this earth.... Creator, Sustainer, Destroyer! Cooing melody of birds serenade me away to a forest of dreams, I find a purpose igniting my saffron imagination, It spreads its wings, and rises to the celestial sphere! A moment of silence, a moment of realization for me… This world wouldn’t be the same without me, and without you!

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Date: 9/5/2024 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Great last line. Have a blessed day writing away................
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Date: 9/5/2024 6:07:00 AM
Dear mala, your saffron imagination and kaleidoscopic vision youv described with such exquisite imagery and metaphors! I love the way youv woven words here and especially caught my eye the way youv questioned and also praised the almighty for simple pleasure in life that we often get to embrace! What a stunning write! Pleasure reading this! Congratulations on your win! Thank you for sharing
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Date: 8/23/2024 10:31:00 PM
A nice take on sunrise, enriched by excellent metaphors. Best wishes.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/24/2024 9:57:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Poet. I get captivated by your word choices, and metaphors. I read your poems often and try to learn.

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