Sotto Poet Poet Rhyme

Symphony of Rainfall

Written: February 22, 2024
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I love the gentle rains of spring
falling with felicity as they sing.
A symphony of sweet romance
Clamor to“Come out and dance”

So, I shall join the raindrops there
While pirouetted through the air 
As rain rolls and returns, I'll sway
As they perform an aerial ballet

The rain will bear a rhythmic beat
On the pavement squishy and sweet
We shall twirl a tango at nature ball
Whilst the sparkling waters mildly fall

Afterward, when the skies start to clear
And the epic dancing is utterly here
I accompany the newly formed rainbow
Raindrops shifting offer a serenade show

Yet, their call will resound in my ears
As supple showers start to fall as tears
Until then, my emotions will remain
The delight of dancing through the rain

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Valsa George February 24, 2024 at 3:30 AM So beautiful and rhythmic like the fall of rain. Very direct and sweet! When sun rains down spears of blistering heat in our place, I long to get wet in the shower of rain. When the epic dancing is over, there arches a rainbow in the sky. These days we hardly see a rainbow even after it rains.... ! May be due to the rise in temperature. Getting soaked in the falling rain was indeed a pleasurable experience as a child. I have got beatings from my parents for the same. All those nostalgic memories, you have revived in me, dear Lasaad !

Duke Beaufort February 23, 2024 at 1:16 PM Gotta love a good rain shower! It's always a treat to watch and to experience. I find that the sound of the drops striking the surface is sometimes like applause.

Jay Narain February 23, 2024 at 10:28 AM Dancing in the rain is always a fantasy. Getting soaked in rain is uplifting.

Sam Kauffman February 23, 2024 at 10:23 AM Dearest Lasaad! Your poem overflows with "rain "delight!" Having grown up in the NW with rain as a companion many days, your poem takes me back home in the most delightful ways with memories of rainy nights, "squishy" ground and the raindrops "aerial ballet!" Your word choice and images are spot on perfectly conveying splashing through puddles, watching the rain and finding joy in every drop! Best wishes if this for a contest. Many blessings to you my friend!

Ink Empress February 23, 2024 at 6:34 AM As always such captivating rhymes dear sotto, i love the descriptive flow of this, and the way youv written. The gentle rain of spring and your love for it so well expressed. This is one of those poems that lifts me up and leaves my soul warm, because of the gentle flow and the delicate touch of language, so well articulated! I especially loved “ Afterward, when the skies start to clear And the epic dancing is utterly here I accompany the newly formed rainbow” gorgeous!!! Fave it is

Anne-Lise Andresen February 23, 2024 at 6:17 AM - You can even make the rain become a beauty ... oh how beautiful that sounds :) - Thanks for the dance, Las :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick February 23, 2024 at 4:31 AM I really like this one. Rain makes some delightful sounds and also brings such a pleasant aroma to the earth. This is the best one you have written in a long time. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Hilda Greenhough February 22, 2024 at 10:03 PM Perhaps there is a song in rain. It is certainly rhythmic. I enjoyed the picture, sound and dance of this poem.

Josefina Costales February 22, 2024 at 8:37 PM To repeat a line- it's truly a delight dancing in the rain..and I love rains, walking in the rain, boots sloshing through the wet roads...but that's just the child in me remembering youthful days. Lovely rhymes.