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Symphony of Breath

Our composing begins when your lips envelope mine and the extent of your breath trails down my spine. In the shadows of night where whispers nibble, through winded thoughts our kisses scribble. Your air lifts me as high as a zephyr glides, with a symphony of touch like trombone slides. The beats of our hearts pulsate like drums beneath an audience of stars with echoed twinkling strums. Nov 3, 2019 Introduction by collaboration Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One

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Date: 11/14/2019 10:18:00 PM
Wonderful collaboration. Congrats to you both on your top win.
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Date: 11/14/2019 3:06:00 PM
Congrats Juliet on yours and Sandy's win in the collaboration contest. Your poetic duet was fantastic.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/14/2019 4:52:00 PM
Thanks, Chris. I appreciate it.
Date: 11/14/2019 2:39:00 PM
... we made the winners list. Thank you again. Check my copy out and you will see what Silent One said about our poem :) congratulations my friend
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 6:47:00 PM
We will have to do it again sometime...it was fun! :) hugs
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/14/2019 4:52:00 PM
Yay! I read his comments and appreciate them as well as being able to share this experience with you. Congrats to you, Sandra!
Date: 11/4/2019 4:59:00 AM
- A great co-write, Juliet & Sandra :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/14/2019 4:50:00 PM
Thanks, Sunshine Smile.
Date: 11/3/2019 8:42:00 PM
Thank you so much for the collaboration Juliet it was fun to write with you...i love this piece... hugs :)
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/3/2019 9:00:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. It was my pleasure. Poetic hugs.
Date: 11/3/2019 8:41:00 PM
A collaboration with Sandra Adams.
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