Symphony of Breath

Our composing begins when
your lips envelope mine
and the extent of your breath
trails down my spine.

In the shadows of night
where whispers nibble,
through winded thoughts
our kisses scribble.

Your air lifts me as high
as a zephyr glides,
with a symphony of touch
like trombone slides.

The beats of our hearts
pulsate like drums
beneath an audience of stars
with echoed twinkling strums.

Nov 3, 2019

Introduction by collaboration Poetry Contest
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Gauthier Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 10:18 PM
Wonderful collaboration. Congrats to you both on your top win.
Green Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 3:06 PM
Congrats Juliet on yours and Sandy's win in the collaboration contest. Your poetic duet was fantastic.
Ligon Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 4:52 PM
Thanks, Chris. I appreciate it.
Adams Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 2:39 PM
... we made the winners list. Thank you again. Check my copy out and you will see what Silent One said about our poem :) congratulations my friend
Adams Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 6:47 PM
We will have to do it again sometime...it was fun! :) hugs
Ligon Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 4:52 PM
Yay! I read his comments and appreciate them as well as being able to share this experience with you. Congrats to you, Sandra!
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 4:59 AM
- A great co-write, Juliet & Sandra :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ligon Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 4:50 PM
Thanks, Sunshine Smile.
Adams Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 8:42 PM
Thank you so much for the collaboration Juliet it was fun to write with you...i love this piece... hugs :)
Ligon Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 9:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. It was my pleasure. Poetic hugs.
Ligon Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 8:41 PM
A collaboration with Sandra Adams.
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