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For S-Words Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance Le France  8/5/23

Sun sets, stars sparkle, sliver chimes tingle Yielding to an oboe's lonely minor key pleading Moonless sky's dark deepens, bassoons, moan Piano notes lightly dance, stars flirt and twinkle Harps and violas, lovely late-night companions Over the hills cymbals clash as a flash storm rages Neon-white flares, heralding trumpets boldly blare Yellow-gold dawn, blue joys sing, a flute abides

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Date: 8/9/2023 1:16:00 PM
Cleverly written Robert. Love how you associated each instrument with a lovely example of natural beauty. Congratulations on your win. Your creativity is much to be admired on this wonderfully written piece. Thanks for sharing and a favorite...
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Date: 8/9/2023 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "SYMPHONY" is a wonderful Acrostic write/lovely picture. Have a great day............
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Date: 8/7/2023 8:32:00 AM
How the colorful symphony, with cymbals clashing and bassoon's moaning, just fabulously done! B0l Robert
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Date: 8/7/2023 9:17:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your win, Robert! ;D

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