Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Sympathy

Sympathy

Sympathy of violins,
Sensate sliding of heartstrings.
Canorously caressing.
Like cherry brandy - feels good.
The warmth spreads, like a prayer shawl.

Fermata holds on too long...

10/2/2017
Early October Premier Contest

*Fermata - prolonging a musical note
**Prayer - with 1 syllable

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Subimal Sinha-Roy October 3, 2017 at 10:56 PM Congratulations, Kim. Kim Rodrigues October 4, 2017 at 6:09 AM Thank you, Subimal!

Constance La France October 3, 2017 at 7:28 PM Kim, such a dreamy poem, CONGRATULATIONS Kim Rodrigues October 4, 2017 at 6:11 AM Thank you, Constance!

Vijay Pandit October 3, 2017 at 6:51 AM This feels so delicate and touching and musical! Best for a win!! Kim Rodrigues October 3, 2017 at 8:31 AM Thanks, Vijay,

Silent One October 3, 2017 at 6:11 AM Kim you did this beautifully.. Kim Rodrigues October 3, 2017 at 8:30 AM Thanks so much, Silent!