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Sympathy Sympathy of violins, Sensate sliding of heartstrings. Canorously caressing. Like cherry brandy - feels good. The warmth spreads, like a prayer shawl. Fermata holds on too long... 10/2/2017 Early October Premier Contest
*Fermata - prolonging a musical note **Prayer - with 1 syllable

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Date: 10/3/2017 10:56:00 PM
Congratulations, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/4/2017 6:09:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Date: 10/3/2017 7:28:00 PM
Kim, such a dreamy poem, CONGRATULATIONS
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/4/2017 6:11:00 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 10/3/2017 6:51:00 AM
This feels so delicate and touching and musical! Best for a win!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/3/2017 8:31:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay,
Date: 10/3/2017 6:11:00 AM
Kim you did this beautifully..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/3/2017 8:30:00 AM
Thanks so much, Silent!

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