Symmetry OCD

Whenever I visit my aunt
She asks if the frames are aslant
Every wall I inspect
And in jest interject
Precise - bar The Storm by Rembrandt!

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CayCay Godwin

March 15, 2026 at 11:10 PM

You got giggle feedback from me!

Paul Callus

March 17, 2026 at 6:08 AM

Thank you CayCay :) Giggles tend to be transferable, even across the ocean :) :) Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

February 26, 2026 at 11:35 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative "Symmetry OCD reentered" write. Great last line. Have a blessed day writing away................

Paul Callus

March 14, 2026 at 4:31 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Paula. ~ Have an enjoyable weekend. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

January 13, 2026 at 5:40 PM

Congratulations you did very well with this excellent one

Andrea Dietrich

January 14, 2026 at 10:30 AM

It's unfortunate that in some cases we have to submit to strict syllable rules when meter is more important. I see you redid it now. Good for you

Paul Callus

January 14, 2026 at 12:58 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Glad I did not start the new year with another n/a :) Best regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

December 20, 2025 at 12:27 PM

Excellent humor. I counted 9 syllables in last line in case that matters to the sponsor. To me it doesn't matter.

Paul Callus

December 21, 2025 at 2:30 AM

Thank you for liking and for the feedback, Andrea. I edited the last line, just in case, though, like you, I was comfortable with the way it flowed. . Best regards // paul